In this version of the new layout for the living room, I have grouped the sofa and the loveseat in the same area for balance and consistency. I know Glen likes to watch TV while eating, for this reason I have added a tray table that easily slides under the loveseat and whose top serves as a tray for comfortable eating.
I have replaced the rug with a bigger one with neutral tones and a floral/leaf motive. A Persian rug, pretty much similar to the one you have, would work as well, but is has to be larger than the current one (ideally 8′ x 10′).
Olive green is the accent color that I think would look nice with the existing colors of the floor, the walls and the couches. Olive green is found in the curtains and the pillows. I have added some nice bamboo shades to the windows for decoration but also to block the light. If you prefer not to use them, only the curtains would work just fine.
I have kept Glen’s family clock and the coffee table as per your request, even though I would consider a bigger coffee table for this space.